A Major Sacrifice

“This devotional for teens . . . provides a strong visual demonstration of what it means to offer their lives as a burnt offering to God.”smouldering fire

[We know what that is supposed to mean, but it would be better not to read so much like human sacrifice.]

“It is Jesus who gives his life for the sheep on the cross.”

[As written, that says that sheep are on the cross. Better as: “It is Jesus who gave his life for the ‘sheep’—when he died on the cross.”]

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